| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 01:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you have write a good chapter when some one feels like strangling the characters! GREAT chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: 946 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 23:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm so glad that she's finally out of the lab, but I hope the story doesn't end yet! And I'm sorry for your loss, take care of yourself.
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 23:13 PDT
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Wow. That was such a beautiful yet sad chapter. Thank you for posting another chapter, despite your family's current condition. Still wishing you all the best. Thank you once again.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 23:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooh!!!!! How bittersweet to see Sam free but not with Kurt, I'm excited to see her reunited with her family but what will she endure without Kurt....
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Reviewed By: Glacier_Tako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful set of chapters!!! It is amazing that even though you are going through a tough time that you managed to upload these chapters. So sorry for your loss. On a more positive note keep writing these wonderful chapters, I look forward to the notification of a new chapter every time I check my e-mail.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this chapter made me cry! It was about as sad as when Jillian and Gavin almost broke up. I love this story! I wonder why Sam's oukai isn't talking to her. I think it's because of the blood but what do I know? haha Good Job and Get better soon!!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:47 PDT
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OMG! I had to read their good-byes twice - I couldn't grasp it either.. I felt like Sam.. is this really happening?. *sigh*. at least they have real names for each other now... I guess Kurt's holy blood was a bit much for her, but being a descendant of Kagome at least probably saved her. Poor Sam was so out of it... *WAH* Thank you for the little reprieve from my "real" life - I'm having my own dramas right now, and it's good to feel someone else's at times. Take care and God Bless.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:26 PDT
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Okay, I'm crying and my mom is laughing at me lol. Oh my gosh, that just about broke my heart! That had to be the saddest good-bye ever! I'm glad she got to tell him her name and vice versa! I wonder why her youkai isn't speaking to her, is it because of the blood he gave her? I hope me saying that I'm crying put at least a little smile on your face, because I know how much you love that lol. Take care!
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry for your loss. Just wrote to let you know that we appreciate all you have done for us over the years and that we support you in your hour of need. I love the idea that former enemies are able to move towards each other when they discover their true mate.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't go back there Kurt! Stay with Sam! I love how this is going.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Pure an simple. Always a pleasure to read your work. :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 16:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The answer to the final thought question, But why was she human …? is that some little demon got on very very well with another demon, and they started to have little hanyous, and one those little hanyous got along very well with another Hanyou, so well that they created a second/third generation of hanyou.... Another good chapter...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 16:21 PDT
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Aw, I almost started crying when he said that! It's the best thing for her, to go home, but they are mates after all. I hope your doing a bit better, even if it's not much, some is better than none right? Keep taking care of yourself and your family, Sue!
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh...i was so wrong about my guess...lol anyway, i loved the chapters, and i give you my condolences on your loss.
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:35 PDT
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I wasn't expecting this email to come for a few days but everyone has their own way of coping with things. I enjoyed this chapter much to the chagrin of my morals. I know I shouldn't enjoy something that someone who's hurting provided but I couldn't help it. I can't wait for the next chapter BUT if you need to take your time. We all understand and don't mind waiting. Great job and do feel better, you and your family.
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