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| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] | | Pages (86): [ « ‹ 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 › » ] | Title: Chap 43 **hears AIKA in head on repeat...and bawls**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Monumental Kleenex tissue fort implodes, buries city, news at eleven... Um, hold me? I think...I shall faint, now... I KNEW you were gonna do this to me soon, Sue! I KNEW you were gonna make me sob silently in this library off this story. HOW COULD YOU!!!!!???????!!!!!!! LOL! I kid, I kid...but, you DID get to me in a major way. Oh, the stuff that swirls around in the minds of those two...enough to render me a blithering idiot. **sniff** That hug was SPECTACULAR and when the dam broke for Sam, I FELT IT! Kurt, in the beginning, sounded murderous--not that I blame him--the whitecoats are just terrible! And poor Kichiro...so torn! Man! Great writing once again, Sue! HUZZAH!
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, and now I'm crying! Why doesn't he just tell her. If he did, then he wouldn't have to make such a promise, he could make a different one. He told her he wouldn't leave her. I don't think she'll realize the double meaning. The name thing is killing me still, but like I said, I'm sure you have something planned for such a big thing. I'm glad Kitch is going to take a break. I hope the next chapter will include Kagome breaking the barrier, but I'm not sure how much is left for them to find. Kurt took everything, didn't he? Thanks for the double chapter!
| Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:57 PDT
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Nooooo I cant believe she said that he wont kill her if anything all these changes should give him the impression that he has to get her out soon. Especially with Kagome coming to break the barrier lol its getting so goood lol
| Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:48 PDT
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that is the saddest chapter ever. she finally broke down and i think tat kurt would probably go crazy from guilt if she told him her other half was human. however if u think of things this way she's no really lying when she says her other half is monster. think about it the white coats treatment of her is horrific and they are seen as the monsters with all the 'testing because the can'that they've been doing. the white coats are human but if humans can act like inhumane monsters then wudnt there be some truth in her claim that she herself is part monster? maybe i am reading to much into this. my heart breaks fir kichiro, sam and kurt and i felt bad that i thought the situation humorous even for a bit when Inuyasha and the boys where in the barrier building. but it was funny. silly inuyasha. i pictured him thumping a fully grown gunnar and shippou transforming into himself as a child do to the overwhelming memories of himslef being thuimped and rubbing his ead with a pained face.. lmaoooo update again soon.
| Title: Discoveries
Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:47 PDT
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Watching Sam and Kurt's relationship develop over the past few chapters has been great, but this chapter, where they just open up and their emotions are raw was very powerful. It was so sad when Sam told him she counts the hours and minutes until she sees him again, and what Sami asked Kurt to do was heartbreaking. But I'm glad that he is understanding his and her feelings. I've always loved the way you portray the family in your stories. No matter how bad things get, no matter what kind of relationship they have, there is always love and support for each other. I think a lot of people would wish their own families were like this. Thoughts and prayers are with you and yours.
| Title: Chap 42 Aw, shucks, now!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Usually, I try to leave a somewhat detailed review but, overshadowed in all I read, one thing stands out--HARLAN SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKS! **ahem** Had to let that out... I LOVE how protective and defensive Kirt is about Sam, now--and how he tells off Harlan, the bastard--and all the 'if only' thinking. Makes me hopeful and scared for Friday at the same time (won't say why, though...). Still, Harlan's making me more nervous by the day.
| Title: Chapter 41...It's gettin' hot in here...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my...back washing? Go, Sam! Poor, un-Miroku-like Kurt...not as much of a perv as he thinks he is, is he? Oh, but time will tell with much more story to come! **sniggers** Sam can smell ya, Kurt...hee hee hee!
| Title: Chapter 40... Can we say Angst Muffin?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
./' Feelings ./' Nothing more than feelings... LOL! Okay, I quit. But, seriously, I'm feeling about as sorry for Kurt as I am for Sam, lately. After a lifetime of keeping to himself he unknowingly finds his soulmate and has to let her go. Yeah, I guess I can SEE why he's dragging his feet. But, he's also a tireless advocate on the Samantha war front and he's got her back, mos def! I got happy for a bit when Evan ran into Kurt till I realized it was too soon for celebration--Kurt's got a hanyou to release and a lab and files to destroy. The lobster...okay, that made me grin like a nut...until the cockroach reference which just figures, right? Kurt gets a kick out of teasing her. But, I've said it ounce and I'll say it again: I'll NEVER look at lobster the same way again. LOL! But, yes, the regret seeps back in... Good gravy, his guilt rivals Cain Zelig's (and that's REALLY saying something!).
| Title: Chap 39 Okay...snow...how sweet is THAT?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so, so, so, SOOOOO glad Youkai and hanyous have such a superior immune system! Whoot! Take THAT, ya bloddy white coats! I love how Kurt talks down to Harlan--the bastard deserves it and I can' scarcely WAIT till he recieves hiw comeuppance! The snow was so niiiiiiiice! I LMAO when they had their snowball fight and Sam smashed Kurt and her YV practically drooled. Ah, good times...goooood times! i just wanted to mollymock that prank caller--that was just sick and wrong! **shudders with anger** Lastly, the Final Thought made me chuckle: She's evil... Great chappie!
| Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big group hug! **glomps all the Purity characters** First of all, that was so sweet with Bas and Evan...hold me... **sniffle** THIS line REALLY got to me: "I didn't think you would," Bas replied. "You . . . you know, right? If you were missing-" "I know," Evan mumbled, scowling at the darkened building below. If he were the one who hadn't come home, Bas really would turn everything upside down to find him, and even if they didn't see eye to eye all the time, Evan . . . Evan would do the same for Bas. "Me, too." AND "...It was just me . . . and Sam." Sitting back, he smiled just a little. "Tagged around behind me everywhere I went. She just . . . and for once, I was the older one-the perfect one." He chuckled quietly and shook his head. "I was you, Bubby . . . the way I used to see you when I was just a little shit." D'Ahhh, brotherly love! I love the openness of their conversations, now. And, at the risk of assuming, it sounds like, as much as Sam wants to be optimistic, she's giving up, too. Kurt's gotcha back, though, Sam! YAY!
| Title: Chap 37 Little Victories, indeed!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL at "Evening, Dopey." That was a good one, Kurt! Loving the conection building between the two and still sighing...
| Title: Chap 36...okay, this was just TOO sweet!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will the wonders/guilt of the hanyou ears ever cease? LOL! This chappie was so funny and fluffy and I NEEDED that after the LAST one! STILL fuming over Peterson...but, I digress. That was so nice of Kurt with the food and extras and **sigh** the postcard...love, love, love, LOVE this chapter, Sue!
| Title: Chap 35...GET 'IM, KURT!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O...M...G! I detest Peterson! Really, I do! I felt such a primal satisfaction reading Kurt decking Peterson--what a 'Don't you TOUCH my Baby Momma' moment! Go, Kirt! HATE, HATE< HATE, H-A-T-E Peterson...F***in' Bastard! Okay, I'm breathing in a paper bag, now...
| Title: Chap 34
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, all I can say is "Yay for the mate bond!" I was so psyched when Kurt "felt" his little demon needed him! **fangirl squee!!!!!** I just LOVED the near-hug, too! **heart melts into a puddle**
| Title: Chap 33
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The 'M' word! **clenches fist** Yeah, that had me cheesy grinning! It's HAPPENING! I'm so happy! I know, I know, there's more to the story and more ups and downs to come but, YAY!!!!!!!! anyway!
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