| "Can't Accept" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: sdfsdfsdf On: July 29, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So what if Brock's dead? To hell with him and Ash. Besides, this is a Darkfic.This is a fanFICTION, meaning the author may manipulate the characters to his/her liking. HAHAHA-Brock and that little prick Ash is dead. I am so sadistic!
HAHAHHA*_* |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: July 28, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved the story. this is the first fics that i've read when misty rapes ash.it was different.keep on writing story's. |
Reviewed By: Red On: July 10, 2003 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty good for a fic. but the raping about ash and misty was gross. Good thought! brock dead... misty jail... ash loser... |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my god. Write another.
~Estuans interius intervehementi~
-One Winged Angel, Sephiroth |
Reviewed By: dude On: July 04, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was too long. i wish i could have sex |
Reviewed By: Oh come on! On: June 24, 2003 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you REALLY have to kill brock? he was cool. =( Anyhow, it was quite good. Unfortunately, you've probably forever destroyed my perception of misty, i'll never be able to look at her the same way again. i'll keep seeing the psycho one. |
Reviewed By: Lady Oak On: June 23, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad!! God Misty is a bitch sometimes. I don't think she'd do something THAT rash but then again you never know.
Good job! This is well written so don't let flames get to you. |
Reviewed By: Busty McPhersill [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is what had to be done! Face it!! look at every other fic , its all preatty boring then you get this, BOOMPF, Misty attacks!! finaly! something awsome. When's the sequil? ITS GOT TO BE DONE!! (how about revenge of misty? like she breaks out if prison and trys to claim revenge on ash... kina a hybrid of all of the other good ideas above...) anyways, this story = PROPA BO' !! and who cares if Misty "would never do that"!! all red heads are f**king nutters!! I should know!!! |
Reviewed By: hteraj25@yahoo.com On: June 18, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit demented but perfectly sensible. Seeing as how I've had dreams like that..... anyways! Two things 1) Write a sequel and 2) What the heck happened to pikachu? I mean he just sorta dissapeared on us. oh well, continue writing ang long live YOU! |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko On: April 24, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw, man!! this was soo good to read! Ive never heard of anything like it! I always knew that Misty girl was a lil bit psychotic... but then again, aren't we all?? AAHAHAHAAAHAHAHHAHHHAAAA!! eheh, please excuse my randomness. i just finished ALL of my college finals and packing... but great story! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Prince On: April 07, 2003 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
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misty couldn't do that, she has her near blind love that keeps her close to Ash while her pride just borders her on not telling him flat out and only dropping super low-key hints that no-one could pick up on as being more than good friends |
Reviewed By: Sailor Rei Star On: April 02, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I wrote for the title, DANG!!! I would have never thought of that story in a million years. I think that is one of the funniest stories ever writen. It was halarious(sp?)! Keep up the good work. I agree; write a sequil. Please!! -_* |
Reviewed By: DragonballZZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel soooo sorry for Ash and Brock ::sniff:: |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! it had me and my friend rollin', it's the funniest thing that we've read since Black Flowers! Yee-haw!!
PS You should've had Brock wake up and rape Misty and then Ash... then kill them both!!! Dun! Dun! Dun!!! |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! it had me and my friend rollin', it's the funniest thing that we've read since Black Flowers! Yee-haw!! |
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