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Reviewed By: Koneko Tenshi Ecchi On: December 30, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. very good fan fic!!! i LOVED it. GOD you are GOOD. i watched pokemon for a year or two, but WOW. so DEEP!!! |
Reviewed By: Melvin On: December 27, 2002 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor brock. now he'll never get a chance to get laid.
brock should have survived.
he represents the horny guy in all of us.
i do think that misty would do that to ash though.
jesse would also do the same thing to james if she got the chance. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: December 20, 2002 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very sad (emotionally) fanfic here. I really hope Ash recovers soon. I know this may sound weird, but I have an idea for a sequel to this, if you would like to write it.
Here it is: The other girls (The Sensational Sisters, Erika, Sabrina, Whitney, Giselle {From Pokemon Tech}, Casey, Officer Jenny, Nurse Joy, and Jasmine) go over to Ash's house. They have heard on what happend to him. They all love him (like Misty did), but would never even think of raping Ash like Misty did. They go over to comfort him, which helps him a little. They stay with him for a few days, never leaving his side and comforting him. He is still very scared and pained (and I wouldn't blame him). They are very sorry for Ash... and really angry towards Misty!! They all wished that they could have protected Ash from her. When Officer Jenny knows on where Misty is, she and the other girls (including Ash's mom) go over to the insane asylum. When they find and see Misty, they go into a rage!! They all take their turns on her, beating her bad! After they all had a turn on her, they leave her bloodied and bruised. Then, they return to Ash, to love and protect him for as long as possible.
Well, that is it. The ending is up to you. I hope you take this into considerastion, seriously. Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good. ^~ I'm not that big of a fan on rape... oO; but overall, I think the story was really good. **Grins** The killing off Brock part people might not have agreed apon, but I think it's original. Afterall, we can't all have the same kinds of stories, can we? I really liked it, hope to be able to read a sequel ^~ |
Reviewed By: BabyKat02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so need a sequel to this. Have Misty get out of jail and sart killing people... deranged I know but still you should do that. |
Reviewed By: Mystery Rater On: November 26, 2002 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a good fanfic. To bad you got a lot of flames... Brock could have woken up and tie Misty up but you didn't have kill him. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*menical laughter* U R GOD!!!! FINALLY! a psycotic pkmn fic thats GOOD! Thank U for Killing Brock! Jeze i hated that perv. but next time dont let the psycho, no matter who it is, be caught, ne wayz its GREAT!!!!! *picks up a knife and snickers to self* wanna dump ME huh? hehhehehhhehehhehehehehehehehheheh |
Reviewed By: lobstersAHOY (lobstersAHOY@msn.com) On: January 08, 2003 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa...
Wonderfully written.
Definitly a different view of things.
...Just another reason why Satoshi should be with Shigeru *ducks tomato*
But, seriously, nice fic. |
Reviewed By: Lola4eva On: November 08, 2002 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What in the heck did you do to Misty!!!! She would never do that!!! |
Reviewed By: The Person On: September 20, 2002 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was actually pretty funny. I used to watch pokemon a long time ago. I was reading other fanfics when I thought "Pokemon is so sugary, I wonder if there are any high rated fanfics" and I checked. This was actually pretty surprising. The first title I saw was "brock rapes ash" and this was basically "misty rapes ash" and I saw the third one was "ash rapes pikachu" as much as it was supposed to be sad, I kept on laughing throughout the story. Whoever would have thought of NC17 pokemon! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Anime On: August 07, 2002 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand 1]Why she would do that to Ash 2]Why Brock died 3]Where's Pikachu! |
Reviewed By: KaoX2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. People do insane things when their heart is broken. Mostly it's suicide, but sometimes the anger controls the person. The window represented Ash's insecurity at the end, and his not smiling indicates his forced loss of childhood innocence. Also to those talking about Brock's death, try taking a bat to the base of the skull, where it connects to the spine. With enough force, it can be a fatal point. You should do a sequal where another girl in the series (aka Duplica, Whitney, Erika, etc) consoles Ash, and eventually they become closer, but a certain someone gets out of jail/the mental institution and won't give up Ash to anyone. Just a thought. |
Reviewed By: SpArKLeStAr182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn did you have to kill Brock? It would've been better if he woke up or something...anyway...it was definitely original, really disturbing, but original. Misty would never hurt Ash, but hey, it's your story, so whatever you say goes. |
Reviewed By: Da Weasle On: June 30, 2002 23:22 CDT
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Misty would NEVER Do that!!! You must not watch pokemon often because Misty is the sweetest little thing! Sure she may have a temper but she would never ever hurt Ash!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cherry On: June 29, 2002 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was great, but poor ash! I mean about the whole rape thing. |
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