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Reviewed By: bettychan On: November 10, 2007 20:28 CST
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why do authors insist on putting notes in the middle of sentences? It does nothing but distract from the story. Especially when they're nothing but stupid nonsense. Please tell me in you next chapter. I would really like to know why authors think they are being funny or clever by ruining a good story with a/n's in the middle of the action.
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 17:00 CDT
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this is a pretty good story so far :), I wonder what will happen in the next chapter :O
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... so sesshomaru saved kagome... what's gonna happen to inuyasha now... what the others... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did it!! I pushed that rotten clay pot into the ground. (Grumbling) I hate her with a burning passion. Haha anyway update soon Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally they all are face-to-face... inuyasha is being his stupid and ungrateful self again... glad that kagome is standing up for herself... will kagome's powers save them... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 18:53 CDT
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please update soon, good story, so UPDATE
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least kagome & sesshomaru are getting along okay... wonder what happens next... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 09:09 CDT
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*glares* your not updating just because i said that you have updated right?
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 19:13 CDT
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oh by the way the status says completed.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is actually the best story i have read so far AND is continuing to update! YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... too bad inuyasha turns evil... would be nice if in the end he realizes his wrongdoings... just being wishful... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the story so far, so update soon!
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