| "For The Last Time" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 19:54 CDT
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a sequel sounds good, but first i would like the stories from chapters 1, 3, & 5 in random scenes. brothers then and now sounds like its going to be a great story i want to see little inuyasha crawling around in sesshy's fur. in connections keiichi is so cute and i want to know what happens with rin (does naraku get her, how do the humans treat a girl who lived her life with a demon, how does she adjust to a settled life when she's been traveling so long, ect), and how does inuyasha's running go? in the last chapter i would like to know more about taro, also why does sess treat her better than inuyasha? apparently taro gets some money and stuff all inuyasha ever had was his firerat clothes and his sword (that sess wants)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 19:29 CDT
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umm did you know that the epilouge is exactly the same as the previous chapter? i think you loaded the wrong chapter.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 17:43 CDT
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another nice chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 13:58 CDT
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thank you for another good chapter
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 03:18 CDT
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i love the 'let's torture jaken game'. that was so cool!! that little imp got exactly what he deserved. update soon. i want to know if kagome can finally transform without getting angry.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was halarious. ~sessh- still tied up* grrrr. ~jaken- whyyyyyyyy?????!!!! kagome- next is tba. up to bat! ~Tba- YAY!!!!!!!! ~Jaken-NOOOOOO!!!!! *tries to run away* ~inu- *picks Jaken up* no way man. if i suffered ur suffering too. ~tba- *has bat in hand & taps it on the ground a few times* ready! ~inu- hm.. ~miroku- behind tba* *holds thumb down* ~tba- come on! give me a fly ball! ~inu- *gets ready to throw* ~kagome- on side lines* HEY BATTER BATTER! HEY BATTER BATTER. SWING! ~inu- throws* ~Tba- hits Jaken causing him to fly out of the studio*maybe we shouldnt play inside. ~sessh- u think?! ~tba-*hears a crash* uh... if a angry home owner comes. or the poilice or the fbi or the guys in black/white comes here. uh... tell them.. uh.. JAKEN TRIED TO FLY! *runs away* EVERY PERSON FOR THEMSELVES!!!! (it wouldnt be fitting to say man now would it?) ~kagome- oh dont worry. jaken's on the roof. `tba- runs back in* oooh. ok. ~kagome- i got him. *aims and shoots jaken with a arrow, pinning him to a tree* ~jaken-trys to get arrow out of hatori* ~sessh-smile* ~tba- OMFG!!!! SESSHOMARU SMILED!!!! ITS THE END OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! RUNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~all except sessh & jaken- *runs FAR FAR away from studio* ~sessh- stands up & chains fall to the ground* idiots. they thought this could keep me still or more than one review? HAH! ~jaken- SESSHOMARU SAMA! Plz get this Jaken off this tree!! ~sessh- uh.. ill come back for you. *whispers to other people* im not comming back 4 him *walks away* ~Black feathers fall from sky and onto the ground. spelling-Update soon! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 06:20 CDT
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this is a great story and i hope to read more of it soon, especially since brothers then and now sounds like it will be good as well and you said you wont start it until this is finished.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs hesterically* ~sessh- uh........tba. *sits in a chair tied by meatal chains* ~kags- dont even think about using ur posion claws! *points dog biscut in his direction* ~sessh-leans foward and snatches biscut with teeth*smirk* ~kags-HEY! GIVE THAT BACK!*PULLS DOG BISCUT* ~SESSH-cletches jaw* ~TBA-.... *walks over to kags & help pull on biscut*DAMN U SESSHOMARU! LET GOOOO! ~SESSH-mumbles* meber ~tba- lets go of kagome and runs behind sessh* kisses his cheek* ~sessh- turns red & lets go of biscut* ~kags- falls on the ground with biscut in hand* raises biscut over head*WE WOON!!!!!!!!!!!!WHOOOO! ~sessh- turns & glares at tba* dirty tricks. ~tba-smirk* update soon. bye. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome & sesshoumaru are getting along... nice that kagome still cares for inuyasha... maybe they can stay friends after what kagome said to inuyasha... will shippou go with kagome now... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
surprise surprise. ~sessh-in chair- help me! ~TBA- now. wat were u doing last sautr- oh hey. didnt notie i was... -pushes sess into a closet- he he he ,.... i like it. never thout that would happen. but i would explain why dreamish knew where she was burried. ~ kiky- wat r u- ~tba- hits her with a shovel- ill burry myself if u dont shut up! ~sessh-breaks out of closet- free at last! ~ tba- takes bucket & pours freezing cold water on him- ~sessh-freezes up- so....-shiver-c...c-c-c-cool-l-ld.. ~ tba- yea wat ever. -throws bucket behind her- any wayz. keep up the good work! update soon! ~ sessh- defrosts- ill kill u! ~ tba- screams- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! -runs- ~ sessh- get back here bitch!!!!!!!!!-runs after her - ~TBA~
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Title: dont worry about other people who say things like that.
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhahahahhahaha! sesshy and a electric collor. cute! and that lady that kirara or kilaka lover or wat the hell her nam was.. no body cares about her opinion. there are many diffrent pairs. who the hell cares wat she thinks! i lik inu kags pairinghs. but i like stories that are sesshy kags pairings. doesnt matter about the pairings. its about the stories. just becuase she doesnt like sessh kags doesnt mean u shouldnt just curse her out. i mean if i heard someone say that to me.. *cracks fingers* *laughs evilly* their as good as dead. in fact.. i put them on my 'list'. dont let them get 2 ya. keep up with the good work and keep updatin. TBA
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story! I like the twist this has taken with Sesshomaru being taken to the future to get healed. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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quite interesting turn of events... what will happen now... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so funny. ha ha! sesshomaru buried kikyo in the back yard. and thats funny about the cemetary. oh, and about that ducktape thing. you talking just makes me wonder more about wat ur reading and planing. oh and to sessh be nice. ur supposed to be a 'good' guy. 'good' guyz dont tape girlz up and burry dead mikos in someone's backyard. no matter how bittchy they may be. (kikyo not u) anyways, keep up the good work. update soon! TBA
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bettychan who the hell cares if she writes the a/n i personally think itz funny nd if it getz in the way skip over it sheesh dont make a big deal out of it... anyway b4 i read tht comment i LUV the story so far.... u better update soon or ill find out where u live nd hold u hostage nd make u keep writing!toodles.. MUHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA *dances away*
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