Reviewed By:ouranlover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 11:10 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is a great story. Keep writing!
Reviewed By:white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:46 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: the story line is great. your spelling fine, your vocabulary needs to increase. Grammer not bad but... could be better. your style could use a tiny amount of work. can i have a real draco for my own personal... enjoyment. P.S. the 'i'll explain later' stuff is getting to be a pain.
