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| "Lord of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT it is one of the best fanfics i have ever read P.S I want a REALY big cookie
| Reviewed By: YashaReader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 03:13 CDT
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Sorry to see that you won't be continuing the story. Good luck on anything else you write.
| Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. i can't wait for the next chapter, so we finally have some lemon!! but a good storyline, although i don't see the bleach crossover part though. but i'm glad you put it in this section also, or i wouldn't have read it. thanks again, and WRITE FAST!!!!
| Title: amazing
Reviewed By: fallen_heart423 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey please continue this I really enjoy this, if you need any help I would be more than happy to help with ideas or anything you need.
| Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 16:09 CDT
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good chapter, keep is up.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 23:52 CDT
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Hmmm, a big cookie, hwo amusing. Personally, I like Gaara better than Nariko for two reasons. One: Gaara acts asexual for years, and it's REALLY awesome in stories for him to eventually find someone. Like Rock Lee. Surprisingly, it's hot. Two: As a guy, Gaara pulls off the coldly murderous thing well, and it doesn't seem like PMS that way. With a girl version, that's gonna be a lot more likely. Also, I do like what you did with Hinata, she doesn't get enough action. And an evil and sadistic Hinata is amusing as hell, though your way to do it, and Naruto's logic for explaining just doesn't work, no offense. Then again, that's my opinion, not fact. Still, Naruto becoming a force of total devastation is always amusing. Especially when he does so alongside Kyuubi. Always amusing. SO, please update again soon, Ja ne
| Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 16:50 CDT
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another good chapter. thanks for updating so fast, it usually takes me a while to update my fics. there were a lot of surprised in this, some i didn't really prefer but it was still a good chapter and story. I never read a female garra fic, i guess im just not used to that. keep writing, i want to see where your going with this.
| Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that is awesome 10 out of 10. Now wheres my dam cookie!
| Title: more love
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, im calm now. That was such a great chapter, please hurry and update, i must see what happens. an evil naruto is so cool. it would cool i hope naruto doesn't get convinced to turn good like ive seen in a lot of fics, but its you story. its perfect so far. hm, are garra and naruto going to meet, they could team up and rule the world. (laughs sadisticly) well please update, this is so great, i promise i'll review every chapter.(shows puppy dog eyes) again great so far.
| Title: love, love, and love
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i just love you. i've been so frustrated because of all the same fanfiction and its about time soone started writing these types of fanfics again. i haven't seen i love naruto fanfiction but i haven't seen any worth reading lately, their all either angsty or is about how loyal naruto is to konoha.(which i think is crap)you have no idea how happy reading this fic has made me. I was pretty much about to give up on fanfiction all together. please don't make naruto loyal to the village because everyone does that. i was so exited when i started reading this fic that i haven't actually read the whole chapter yet. i got to when he first finds oro's lab and after that i couldn't wait any longer to tell you how happy i was to read this fic. Ok im going to stop ranting and finish the chapter. thank you, thank you, thank you.............thank you.
| Reviewed By: genmaproctor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, its got good ideas and a very interesting plot. I wanna see some more chapters, because I'm wondering how deep Naruto is going to get involved in Oro's experiments (i'm also wondering what that wierd black thing is.) However I don't see where it is a Bleach crossover. Maybe you should've put it under just Naruto.
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