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Reviewed By: tiemiosho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 12:44 CST
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Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10

Comment/Review:
Much better than the lame crap I usually read. Try putting in new paragraphs for the first chapter. Consider Yusuke having the dream on his mind a little more instead of that constant "bring it on." Very fluid action, but your description of your OCs halted the story for a moment. But thank you for not making them mary sues! Wish ya luck!

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