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| "Youko's Forgotten Past" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Nice! :)
Reviewed By: Bray [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. Personally, I really like this story (and thanks for reviewing mine). It's plot is developing nicely and you keep every character in check. I'm excited to see more to it, and I hope you update soon! But next time, try giving it a quick once-over just to check for some grammer mistakes. See you soon! - Bray
| Reviewed By: Mayah On: January 06, 2008 05:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Squee!~ I know that Youko's definitely ooc, but I still adore this story and its plot. I hope you continue to write. I can't wait to see how Youko and May's fight turns out. ^w^ Keep up the good work!
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