| "Sunshine and Sand (are making me sick)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: Vallikins On: January 20, 2008 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a wonderful writer!!!! I loved this, it was so cute! I could clearly see the whole story! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: StainedAngel3670 On: December 20, 2007 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this has to b one of my favourite ichigoxrukia fics. really cute and melts the heart.. good job xxx
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Reviewed By: NDG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright...I've read a few IchiRuki fanfics before..and this has to be the best =) It was cute and romantic, but it wasn't exotic and..eh..nasty :S It was really good =D btw if it's not obvious (and you haven't read my other comment XD) This is Naughty-Dog-Girl from the Otaku =P I just had to sign up here so I could rate this fanfic XD It's awesome! Keep it up!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was incredible! My favorite line: "She didn't know why he hid that smile so often...it was the best smile she'd ever seen..." OMG, line was PERFECT! This was quite funny with the parts of Rukia's disgust and confusion about coming to the beach, and the part about the volleyball I laughed out loud. But when he showed her the little secret spot on the beach... and how he carried her on his shoulders.... and oh my gosh! The first kiss... it was so fluffy and sweet! I'd love to see more work from you, so I'm checking your profile. But good job on this! I hope more readers will take a look at this and review... this is really being overlooked. Ta-ta, gg
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Title: Kudos to you!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was cruising through ff.net and I saw your fic posted there, so I'm really glad that you put in on mm.org so more people can read it. This story is so cute and when I finished I was smiling warmly. I loved how Rukia was so trepidacious when she went to the beach, her reaction to the hot sand was priceless and brought back memories of my own burned feet and multiple gallons of aloe. Adding her reaction to the staring girls also showed the hint of jealousy every true IchiRuki fan knows lurks beneath the surface. I absolutely adored the connection of Ichigo's past to his little paradise and telling Rukia he wanted to share it with her made it even more wonderful. Please keep writing and definately continue posting on this site! Au revoir pour maintenant!
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