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| "Time waits for no one" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Aelita18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its was really nice but the chapters got messed up... but its okay. Update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: tsubasabunditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis really good. what happened 2 chapter 2? ts the same as chappie 1. also, its hard to understand whats happeneding when for example u write something like this: "Thanks, Mikan..." She smiled. when ruka has sed thanks but mikan has smiled. it gets confusing. so put it on seperate lines in future kk? otherwise great =D keep up the good work
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