| "Tamming Two Hearts or Breaking One" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Job. Update ASAP
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Reviewed By: Tim48 On: December 30, 2007 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and your doing a good job. But Naruto is just going to have to have two girlfriends. He can't break Hinata heart so he's a lucky guy.
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO HAVE A CLIFF HANGER!!!!!
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Job. now......HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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Title: About Naruto, Hinata and Sakura
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 02:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm a threesome lemon..........maybe you guys will have to find out on your own.
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Title: Damn Good Story.. Now Update it!! haha
Reviewed By: sinnerboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story you have.. umm it would be great if you would stop with the cliff hangers haha even though they do add suspense.. Have you thought about making a Lemon with Naruto Sakura and Hinata? that would make for one damn good twist lol.. But hey your doing good keep it up.. Also Update this story now!! lol
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT ARE U WAITING FOR!?!?!?!?!?!?! KEEP GOING!!!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!
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Title: Good Story.. Udate NOW!! lol
Reviewed By: Just a Fan On: December 20, 2007 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story you have going here.. I think your doing fine on your Lemons lol.. Oh My God the places that you choose for your cliff hangers are great, hence why i hate them so much haha.. Please Update very soon..
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going, I want to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter. keep up the good work. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's got my attention so far. If it was spaced with better gramar that would rock but it won't stop me from reading it anyways lol. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, all I would say to improve it would be to watch the word placement and grammer. Also, I'm guessing the genin team is going to be Konohamaru, Moegi, and ...dang that other guy that hangs out with them...>.
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Title: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIVE WORDS!!!! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH UP THE CHAPTER!!! I hate Cliff Hangers!!!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. Please try to update soon.
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