| "Tamming Two Hearts or Breaking One" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: More chapters from the story
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 14:40 CST
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Hey I want you to know that I wrote more chapters from the story until chapter 19 go to fanfiction.net under my profile thanks for the review.
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Title: OH SHI*
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HONEY SMACKIN SHIT!THIS SI GONNA BE THE FIGHT OF THE CENTURY ALMOST.O_O; better hope konoha survives naruto. also,whens the next chapter due?
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Title: IMPORTANT NOTICE
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can upload chapters to this site becase I havent fix the file format problem so please if you're interested in reading Tamming two hearts got to fanfitcion.net under my profile I have uploaded chapter 15 and 16.
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Title: Painful
Reviewed By: Kingkakashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot but the last couple of chapters from an emotional standpoint were painful to read. I feel so bad for all three of them, but especially Naruto. He's been so devoid of love his whole life, I could understand his accepting of love from the two girls who love him and who he loves as well. Not to sound selfish, but for what his life has been like growing up. I think he deserves both Hinata and Sakura. I hope that's how it will end up? I think Hinata and Sakura need to sit down and discuss some things. Keep up the amazing work.
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Title: ARGH!
Reviewed By: Devoted reader On: June 02, 2008 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! first you leave us hanging for a moth..and now you leave us with a huge cliff hanger! ARGH! All this frustration just shows how much i love your story...
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Title: Don't Hurt Hinata or Sakura
Reviewed By: Kyuubi-Sama On: June 01, 2008 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story! Can't Naruto have both of them? I mean he is the last of his clan so I would think the Council would allow him multiple wives to rebuild it?
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Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 04:51 CDT
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Very good. I really like the lemons!(expecially the Sakura ones!) Am I the only one to reamr that the Sakura lemons are, you know, wicker?(food things and such) That's fun! :)
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Title: Don't get mad
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 18:21 CST
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Please Naruto1217 don't get mad I promise I will update as soon as I can that's a promise.
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Reviewed By: 566Bravo On: February 01, 2008 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
CURSE YOUR DAMN CLIFFHANGER!!! A few grammer problems, but not a problem. But then again that lucky ninja, Naruto, is quite the player. He's gonna have both isn't he a Ménage à trois thing going on is he? ;)
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:23 CST
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As always very well written, even if there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. Keep up the good work
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Title: FINISH UP THE CHAPTER!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST FINISH THE CHAPTER MAN!!!!!! COME ON!!!! PLEASE!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Naruto1217 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why Do you always, and i mean ALWAYS stop the chapter in the middle of it!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 10 notice
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to thank all of you for the reviews I really appreciate it now as soon as Im done with chapter 47 of Moon shinobi I will upload the next chapter from this story.
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Title: Dilemma
Reviewed By: Lady Tsunade Ruler of the World On: January 17, 2008 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just discovered this story and it's very good. you have an interesting dilemma going on in the story. I'm a huge Naruto/Hinata fan so I would hate to see her get hurt in this. But I also like what you've done with Sakura. I think your only solution is to come up with some sort of scenario that allows Naruto to be with both of them, since he loves each of them. Obviously, you'll also need to have both Hinata and Sakura accept and be willing to share Naruto's love with the other and vice-versa. I hope you can do it? I think it would be perfect for this story.
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Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely made and the idea's solid as well, though I wasn't expecting Ino to be with Chouji. And so far the story's pretty good. Though some of the spelling does need some work. Overall I hope t see just what the result of this love triangle will be, so update soon okay?
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