| "No More Sorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 18:05 CDT
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Ah, so Vegeta only heard part of the conversation an it was out of context, phew! Nasty scheming Gohan. Glad they sorted it out and defied their sons in the end. Not sure I will like your alternative ending when you post it as I prefer happy ones, or at least ones where they end up together :)
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: November 29, 2007 21:57 CST
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Oh no! Why did Goku yell that? Poor Vegeta, his worst fears confirmed, and they were getting on so well. Hope Trunks and Gohan get their comeuppance soon. How dare they try to stop true love. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great stuff. xxx
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Reviewed By: Dacchiare On: November 29, 2007 07:48 CST
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Oh no. :O Trunks and Gohan are such joykillers. Just when everything seemed to be alright between Goku and Vegeta. Hopefully you can solve this mess!
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: November 13, 2007 15:09 CST
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Nice chapter, some cute and touching moments. Glad Vegeta's coming to terms with his feelings and Goku is not messing him around as I was wondering if he knew what he was doing for a while. But now they've kissed so I can breathe easier. I hope Goku can stop any plots from their sons, wonder what they try next to split them up? Looking forward to the next update.
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Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 04:23 CST
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The kiss!! it is lovely! It turns out great! But I don't like what the two demi-saiyan are plotting. It worries me. Veggie was kind of sad and empty after Bulma's death. It feels like Kaka is taking some advantages here. Will he realise that Kaka is the person he always wanted but not a pure replacement for his loss? Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: November 07, 2007 15:09 CST
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Did Goku really not know what it looked like on the sofa, and did Trunks really believe him? Mmmmm. Love how they are slowly getting closer, and can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Dacchiare On: November 07, 2007 00:11 CST
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Yay, a new chapter! ^^ I like how they are so confussed about each-other. Gonna see their first kiss soon? ;) Hopefully waiting...
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Title: Awww..
Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 05:33 CST
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This chapter is sweet. Goku is filling the void of vegeta's life when Bulma is gone. I like it. However, there might be more between these two apart just filling the void, I think. |Good work and Keep it up girl.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: October 30, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Love how you are slowly building their friendship rather than rushing into it. The end of chapter 2 was particularly moving, I had watery eyes when I read it. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Dacchiare On: October 29, 2007 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. ^^ I really like your story and of course Goku/Vegeta pairing. It's not easy to try and get them togethet, when Bulma's death is a recent and very heavy burden on 'Geta's shoulders. Atleast that's what I think... I've read a couple of fics where Bulma or Chichi is dead and Goku and Vegeta have to comfort each others. Sometimes it's kind of clumsy if they found each other too early, or forgot their mates deaths altogether. But I trust that you can get them together just nicely. I just love that pair so much, and I'm always happy when someone is writing some really good fanfictions about them. I can't rate your spelling or style of writing, when I now that I would do so badly if I tried to write something reasonable in english... :D Hope you keep on writing, 'cause I'm keeping on reading. ^^ Love, Dacc
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