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| "Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: lara_101_chick_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 16:23 EDT
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korisovra, you need to shut up. thanx for posting this piece as a one shot, but if u dont mind, could you keep a yaoi warning in the description so poeple will their negativity to themselves(i do the same thing will my yoi/oneshot fics, but people are too damn lazy to read descriptions)...anyways, i dug the hell out of your fic, and by the way, the pregnant thing was way hilarious(harry's definatly the submissive, i can see draco being dominate)^_^ good times, man
| Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 04:07 EDT
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To the previous poster: One shot is a type, yaoi is a genre. Please read the summaries more carefully, no one likes a negative comment. To the author: interesting story - creative plot. I don't understand the 'pregnant' bit at the end, but I'll assume it's an inside joke I've been left out of. :) Sometimes difficult to follow the point of view during the dialog. Pronouns are sticky things, and proper names are cumbersome... I'm not sure what the happy medium is. If you find it, please let me know! ^_^ Cheers!
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