| "Protecting" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Cutie Pi On: August 21, 2002 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I relly liked the POV of diff people not just vegeta and Bulma, but it was a bit hard to understand who was talking so i gave u a 9
Spelling and Grammer were a perfect 10 GREAT job!!
Originality was a 7 cuz it was a B/V story u find a lot of those but i think a 7 is still good, i really liked the story and it was a bit different from others so i liked it a lot!
Definatly an enjoyable read! I gave u a 10 cuz i was pleased with the entire story!
and a 9 as the overall GREAT WORK!
I learned bout this fic throu ur picture i really liked that too it was sweet and wen along with the story! Ur a great artist and author!~Cutie Pi p.s i loved when Goku threw Bulma out the window so Veggie wuld come out of hiding and save her, i also liked the end of the story when it wa Goku's POV and he ended the story, once again GREAT work!! |
Reviewed By: korin On: June 28, 2002 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was great the story was capturing and everything seemed to be in order....my reasoning is very hard to explain!great story though:) |
Reviewed By: Strawberrychik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Hardly anyone writes in the first person naritive...its so cute...I love the situations you put the characters in hehe....Goku: "Not the needle!!! ahh! Vegeta HELP!" :::runs::: LOL Please write more! ^_____^
~strawberrychik~ |
Reviewed By: cosmoskat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww this is so cute! ^.^ I can't believe no one else reviewed your story! Jeeze, I found it under the "Hidden Gems" section of MediaMiner, and after reading your work I'm quite surprised to have found it there - although I must admit, your story is a "hidden gem." Hee hee, anyway I love how you wrote the characters and the situations you put them in . . . *lol* Goku throwing Bulma out the window that was priceless! ^_^;; Some of the character point-of-views were great too, like Mrs. Briefs. I really like how you ended this too, very clean and complete. Please keep up the great work OujoNoSuki, I hope to see more fics from you soon! ^.~
-cosmoskat =^.^= |
