| "That's the Way Love Goes" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: DivaG On: January 30, 2008 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I relly hope that Sesshoumaru doesn´t ignore Kagome when he regains his memory back. I don´t relly think he is too out of character, after all he lost his memory and it can make people act more freely than the way they are trained to be. In other aspects he is still the same. Kagome too is in character: she´s so torn between her decisions, still thinking so poorly of herself and, obviously, very unsecure of the feelins Sesshoumsru has for her, considering his situation. I relly hope Sesshoumaru continues true to his feelings, for, who knows, perhaps he already felt attracted for her before and didn´t pursue his feelings because of his brother? Anyway I can´t wait for another update. Bye
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 28, 2008 18:26 EST
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WONDERFUL!!! I love both stories that you are working on now, so I do not mind which one you update as long as you continue writing. I feel bad for Inuyasha though he loves her, but he is so thick headed at times. I also enjoy that Shippo has started to grow some and is able to activate the demon sense that he has in him. Great job!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 05:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so that's why you've waited with the updates? You wanted the manga to catch up a little more first? :) Well, that was a hot chapter. Can't wait to see what will happen next chapter when and if he gets his memories back then. I'm sure he'll revert to his regular icyness. :) Oh and by the way, I have a hard time believing that Ah-Un would fit in Kaede's hut. XD
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and the new sentitive sesshoumaru. I really hope you update soon and maybe add an dictionary in the begining just to make it a little easier to fallow.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 01, 2008 18:30 EST
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WOW!!! This chapter was fabulous...the tension and the possibilities of what could happen next are great. I do have to admit that I feel bad for Inuyasha because he wants to go after Kags when he finds out that she did not go home. Granted that it is necessary of for him to heal, but I think that Kags needs to know that he is okay. At the same time Inuyasha has had plenty of time to tell her how he feels and I agree with Miroku on the promise part. I adore the sensitive and attentive side of Sesshoumaru. I wonder what is going to happen when he regains or if he regains his memory. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 08:51 EST
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Ah, this update came sooner than I thought. :) It's gonna be interesting to see what happens when Sesshoumaru finally regains his memory. Then he will be back in his stoic self, and a little more in character. :) I wonder how he will see Kagome then. One thing I especially like about this story is that Sesshoumaru doesn't have a castle with a bunch of servants and such. I just find that highly improbable. Though some make good stories on that theme too. I just hope you get time to update more frequently, as I had to read the last chapter first to remember which story it was. ;)
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Title: Hilarious!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 17:53 EST
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I agree with you - your story is hilarious! I absolutely adore it. His now sweet demeanor is endearing though. The only problem I have with your story (and believe me it's a personal quirk of mine) was the number of japanese words. I didn't know what many of them meant but going back and forth from the story to the little definitions just so I could follow along is cumbersome and is something your reader shouldn't have to do. Other than that, excellent!
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Reviewed By: Hypedupgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLZ!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: November 08, 2007 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Please keep going with this story I really enjoy it. Oh, how much trouble is Sango, Miroku, and Shippo going to get into for lying to Inuyasha?
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: daniella m On: November 08, 2007 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz make another sequal
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 08:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looked you up here instead, since it's so convenient with the emails that come when you've updated. :) (I'm lazyjenny from DA) This was a really cute chapter! I can imagine Kagome being totally confused as to why he was being so nice to her. By the way, Rin took care of him after he was defeated by the windscar, not after his arm was cut. Just so you know. ;) I hope you will continue to update frequently, this seems like a really good story! And like I said before, it's nice with an up-to-date story (with Bakusaiga and stuff).
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: November 03, 2007 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story and am waiting to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 22:25 EDT
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Character portrayal is leaning a bit too much towards fanon over canon for my comfort, and I hope that as you develop the story that you have the other characters act within the cultural context of the period. I don't expect you to be a scholar of Japanese history, but, far too many fanfic writers have InuYasha, Sango and Miroku act as though they were living in modern LA.
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