| "Shiver Woman Shiver" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was good!! I did not think that it would end like that... great job!
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Title: WOW...!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I was a bit reluctant, but after reading it completely, I must say that I am now in awe!! One word comes to mind: AMAZING!! What a gift with words!! There is not much more I can say about it, except that this gift you have with words, makes us common folk, jealous of you!!
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 23:04 CST
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"Don't forget the ramen" - oh how hilarious is that. Wonderful cadence and tempo, and then the total mood shift at the end just really got me. It's great ^_^
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! great writting. very entertaining, dark and very funny
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 18:18 CST
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"atand there absolutely still -" Maybe should be stand instead of atand? Just wanted to make sure you noticed so you could fix if it's not meant to be that way!
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy I read this! I love the tempo. I read it aloud and it worked so nicely to start in a soft whisper and slowly crescendo into a soft voice and slightly faster going along and slowing here and there.... and the end was just the sweet cherry on top! **giggles in perfect happiness** Thank you for sharing your poem!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles* Very nice.
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