| "In My Heart, Always" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!*squeal* AWWWWW! dat was soooo cute i luved it!!! u no how wen somthing is sooo cute u giggle and start to squeal? well if it doesn't happen to u it happens to me! ne ways awsome stori and keep it up!!! *Giggle, squeal!* U C?!?
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!*squeal* AWWWWW! dat was soooo cute i luved it!!! u no how wen somthing is sooo cute u giggle and start to squeal? well if it doesn't happen to u it happens to me! ne ways awsome stori and keep it up!!! *Giggle, squeal!* U C?!?
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Reviewed By: YrRaH On: December 25, 2007 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUAL!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Em On: October 31, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I wish it was long and not a one shot but this was just great. Keep writing ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
i have a big fluff addiction and i believe i've found a new supplier. yasha/kagome is a favorite. as i have time i shall read your other work. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww!! Cute story. Ever think of expanding it? 'Cuz that would be awesome!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this song and I love the way you wrote the story around it. though you did add an h in wore and that kinda messed it up.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is absolutely lovely! It's kind of hard to write a review when my mind is stuck in happily-ever-after land. I love Aiku!!! I want to tweek his little puppy ears so bad! I wish it was a longer story, but this way I can dream that things go just perfectly for everyone from now on. Thanks for writing!
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Title: Mandarin Oranges !!!!
Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, again I'm first. This one was cuddley wuddley. There were only a few grammatical errors (as in you used the wrong word), but once again, really good. I liked how you showed their inerter moil too. Kinda makes me wonder what's gonna happen next to the group and to Aiku. Hmmmmmm… this leaves much to ponder…
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