| "Why Don't You Love Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Evil.B On: August 22, 2002 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my GOD! this story is so far my life exsept my mom took me with her and sent my bro to our aunts O.o freaky wrights some more it might be my futer :)
JA 'NE |
Reviewed By: person On: June 27, 2002 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! I WANT THE SECOND CHAPTER UP ASAP! very orginal, thought I wish it was a little bit more angsty. But go any direction you want with it. Though I think the thrid child should not be born. I would like to see all the ogrinal characters in this fic only. (hates insertions fics) |
