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| "Monsters in Konoha" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like it so far, please continue on with the story. I know I'll read it when you post some more up, I'm curious to see what happens!
| Title: akamaru's size
Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
by the time that kiba was that size akamaru would be big enough for kiba to ride on his head.
| Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the new chap! it was good!! update soon!!! i really want to read more!! and happy thanx giging to you too!!!
| Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic! i liked it!! so keep it up and update soon! i'll be waiting to read more!
| Title: Monsters of Konoha Review
Reviewed By: Assimilated_Kyuubi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. very origional and good idea. places where the wording tripped me up a little but overall it was worth reading. I'll bookmark to see if you update it or abandon it. But I advise that if you really don't want to write about it, don't write like ten chapters and then abandon it forever. i hate that, some of the best stories i've read were that way and it (explatived) me off. so what, did they like get bit by like a were-something, or maybe perhaps it could be like kiba's family are some like secret cultists or something that worship demons and they convinced kiba to befriend naruto so that he could lure him into their clutches and they like did some evil ceremony that caused Naruto to turn into a were-kyuubi when there was like a full moon, or when they like did some evil ceremony. that would be like totally cool. and kiba got all bit by him and stuff and so now kiba, since he's like a dog or something is all like, a were-akamaru, my favorite kind of akamaru by the way. but naruto couldn't be like all out kyuubi-fied were-kyuubi, cause then he'd just like kill everything and the story would be over, he'd have to be just like physically were-i-fied or something so that way no one would know and make it all mysterious and junk so it could be like some murder-mystery-monster ninja game of clue. or you could make it whatever idea you had too. that's probably good too.. anyways, i'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. i would like to take one tiny little miniscule, inexcusably inept, jab at the rather small amount of time it took me to read your story, so.... attempts to make a punch, but then swings like a girl before screaming like one as he trips over his own poorly laced voit shoes and tumbles to the floor in a pimply-obese heap.... well there you go. you could make it a little longer. i mean come on.. i dare say this review is longer than your first chapter. not really but you get my point. well i'm spent. there you go. I hope you keep it up, i look forward to reading. cheerio gov'na, Master Shake
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