| "Dirty Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: As the kids say:
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 09:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hawt! Very nice writing. To the other reviewers I would say that it works perfectly as a one shot. It's complete as it. The things I like include the way you express her discovering her sexuality with a lover who does what she wants but with whom she can bypass the embarrassment since she believes it's a dream. Well, up until today when she's maybe getting enough experience to wonder at finding cum on her thigh. The blur between dreamworld and reality is a bit too thin for her? Well done.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the rating, I never rate really high unless I absolutely love the story. Anyway, are you planning on updating? I really would like to know the outcome... I'm assuming his cum was there? I mean, blood is relatively normal for a woman. I'm curious. Do continue.
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Reviewed By: BaneOfSociety [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 04:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This cannot be a one-shot. Please? Tell me that this is just listed as being complete as an error or as a teaser for a chaptered fic. Please?
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 16:19 CST
Comment/Review:
awsome sotre.. wish you'd continue.. pweeseee
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