| "Mending a broken heart" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 05:19 CST
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this is a great story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 02:29 CST
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poor youko. he never should of let kagome go. although i have a feeling kagome made it back to the future. update soon. i want to know some more.
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Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
youko no baka!! I can't believe he'd do something so stupid!!! I hope Kagome recovers quickly. So, 3 questions, does youko know about kagome's time travelling ability and in the present era does he remember her at all? what made him say that kagome was not good enough for him? I enjoyed kuronue's involvement in the arguement. That okinawa is truly useful at times. I really wonder what the circumstances he couldn't control were, if it's a woman I'm going to gouge out his eyes, rip off his ears and make him a eunich, he truly doesn't deserve kagome. can't wait til the next chapter
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 03:10 CST
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aahh man. you stopped right when it was getting good. update soon. i want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 00:32 CST
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please update here. i want to read some more.
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Reviewed By: Emilee On: November 24, 2007 03:56 CST
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it's...AMAZING!
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Reviewed By: Lover's Betrayal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could Youko pull this?! He better reconsider! .....HEY, maybe Youko wont recognize her completely but Suichi will fall for her completely?! Please update ASAP!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: MillicentHellix On: November 08, 2007 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. soo sad. Please keep them coming!
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Reviewed By: Sarah9567 On: November 06, 2007 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting take on the New Moon dilemma. Did Yoko know of Kagome's ability to time travel? Were her wounds fatal? Is this going to be a long story?
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: November 03, 2007 05:32 CDT
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what the hell was he thinking?! i know that past Youko is a prat but hell!!! grrr... i would rip his cute fuzzy ears off if i was her! and i'd shave his tail!!!!! that poor girl! death to all blond/white/silver haired men!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! luv jenna xoxox P.S. i really like this so far but you need to change the catigory so it says Yu Yu Hakusho as well as InuYasha you rock btw xoxox
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Reviewed By: Cascada6884 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tears came to my eyes as I was reading this! please, no more heart wrenching chapters. I don't think my heart can take it.
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Reviewed By: Michiko11 On: November 03, 2007 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT IN THE WORLD IS HE DOING!?! Kagome has been through hell and back, and Youko goes and pulls a stunt like this!?! update soon!
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