| "Raiu Renai" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: shouldve been longer
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story but the lemon should have been longer!!! i love it though! it made me all hot and steamy! :P
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this over AFF it was as good there as it is here.
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