| "Inner Hollow, Demon Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Wolf_of_Fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite good. plz continue to update sooner rather than later. people nedd to read this and i know from experience that sometime the stories with less chapters arent read due to not wanting to wait. plz hurry, i nedd more and keep up the good work
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 10:46 CST
Comment/Review:
stupid stupid Sakura.thanks for the chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 01:11 CST
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I love the insane Naruto and I have to say thank god that you changed Sasuke before you made him Naruto's friend( or whatever else you would say he is)
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lomotherfuckingl, this was the best chappy ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 02:58 CST
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Neh, the style is amusing, but it takes a bit to get into the mood. On the other hand, it was a good lemon scene for Haku (though I'd think of it as more of a lime myself, because the penetration was interrupted, oh well). Anyway, I look forward to the next update. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Rowinr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 21:34 CST
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Great story so far i look forward to seeing where you go with this story.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 09:42 CST
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"Hmmm, pain good" MWAHAHAHAHA!!! PAIN IS LIFE< IT TELLS YOU YOU"RE ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!! Now that I'm finished with the insanity portion of our program, I warn you that excessive weights only increase bulk, not speed. I warn you, it's not a healthy way to train. Thus, DBZ IS CRAP! On the other hand, it would be funny if it did work. Too bad it only encourages you to function at one insane speed (Lee for example). ANyway, update soon, this story makes me laugh, always a good thing. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is this is some of the funniest stuff I've read. Its a good story with a very interesting beginning. I look forward to reading more when its updated further.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 00:45 CST
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Meh, do what you want with this story, just continue to write it. That way, much mroe can be done. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
definetly...different. not in a bad way, its just kinda...out there. but that seems to add to the rich sense of coolness that seems to eminate from this fic. i liked your view on the kyuubi, and his attributes. so overall, just keep em coming.
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