| "My Business" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Inix On: March 22, 2008 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much. Keep posting. The characters are kept well to their behavior. You have a good style of writing. I just have one more thing to say...Stop being better than me at everything XD
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Reviewed By: Dra_go [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really hard to find good fics. But this one is definitely worth reading. Up, up, up, please!
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Reviewed By: ritsukaisnotloveless [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it please keep writing more -is very addicted- i can't get enough x3
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the AU's I've read, yours is by far the best. I love how I don't have to be distracted by the out of character occurances that pop up in many a fanfic. Great job and I can't wait to read more!!! XD
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they're perfectly in character! (Sasuke and Itachi, that is) Maybe even better than the original characters X_X But yea, I like the scenario you came up with. The wedding and the hotel rooms. Even if the Uchiha brothers aren't going to be spending a room together (it looks like). Sasuke's so cold! But I'm such a fangirl, cuz I think it makes him so undeniably adorable when he tries to hide his feelings for Itachi!! And what was up with the scene on the rooftop with Sasuke and Naruto? That was awkward, but for some reason it didn't have a negative effect on the story itself. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!! I really want to read the second installment!!
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