| "Torn betwixt them" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: gottcha78 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2012 10:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this... I'm just sorry that I didn't know about fanfic before recently! I really, really, really wish you would finish this story!! This one has me chomping at the bit to read more! |
Title: omfg
Reviewed By: Ki de Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2011 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good fic. A little bittersweet for my biased, Hikaru loving self. One thing that really kind of stood out to me was that sempai is actually senpai. I know it's kind of trivial, but I'm a total Nazi (sorry). Besides that, I really, really liked this. You're Kyouya personification was very good. I don't think Bisco sensei could have done it better. =) Keep up the wonderful work. |
Title: Torn betwixt them
Reviewed By: Otakumom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. Koya is so dark and sexy! Normaly I'm TamaXHaru all the way, but this was just great. All I can say is more pleaze?!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! its been a couple years since you last updated and i would really love to read more! so far its been amazing
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Reviewed By: solodarity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 17:10 EDT
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i really loved the latest chapter...well all of it actually.. it all goes along well.. im kinda curious though as to why tamaki chose to not stay with haruhi...is it just because he feel in love with eclair? i like the pairing of kyoya and haruhi and im looking forward to the confrontation of hiraku and kyoya hehe...please update soon! mwah!
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Reviewed By: az On: April 20, 2009 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A minor detail or two have been left un-ironed. "his voice deepened a slight octave"
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 14:17 EDT
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Wow... I LOVED it! I can't wait till the next one comes out!
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Title: ( * * )
Reviewed By: silveraine On: February 13, 2008 10:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good my friend!! magnifico!! do more!!
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Reviewed By: cynsny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 12:19 EST
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I enjoyed it, too bad it hasn't been updated in a while.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 00:03 EST
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~squeals~ THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!! it made my crazy fangirl day!!! Please write more & update soon.
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Title: ??
Reviewed By: ?? On: November 25, 2007 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its awesome!
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Title: OMG...
Reviewed By: foxfire79 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 10:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaaaaaaaa! *screaming in fangurlish glee* That was so damn hot! Please continue! (I'm a massive idiot for Kyouya/Haruhi pairings!)
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Reviewed By: LunarG On: November 19, 2007 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very hot! So kind of you to let Kyoya's dark side out to play... and Haruhi enjoyed it, too. I wonder how much work the Shadow King had to put into being her roommate -- and keeping everyone else away from what was his. Particularly loved his 'host-with-a-dark-edge' game with her hurt ankle, before he really lost it. More spicy dom Kyoya, please!
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Reviewed By: Literati77 On: November 12, 2007 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So far, this has been an absolutely wonderful story. That last chapter...wow. I hope Haruhi ends up with Kyouya... Oh, and I'm also glad that you're not ignoring all the other characters in this story. Some people tend to just leave them behind.
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