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| "Boiling Point" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: me On: November 06, 2007 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyable as always - I love your sex scenes. found this one a bit strange though- did you rape a thesaurus? the 'flowery' language felt a little forced
| Title: hey!
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
(where did the rest of my review go?) It was Seifer's misfortune to be showering next to Squall? MISFORTUNE? X3 You're crazy! heheh I particularly liked the ending, and although it was OOC in the content of how the whole thing came about and perhaps even Squall's lasciviousness, once they were into it, it seemed pretty evened out. I love so much how you portray Seifer's attitude, and though I'm not fond of rape scenes, I like his manly roughness =D And, a personal question if you have the time to answer ^ ^;; I've actually been wanting to ask for awhile now, how you choose your diction; that is to say, do you have kind of tips for how you write the things you do?
| Title: Yay :3
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eats the words*
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