| "The New Guy" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Tribbles On: April 19, 2008 12:59 CDT
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ahh my comp screwed up my message *tear* Well, anyway, you did a great job with Rin's Character xD and i bet Archer would act like that if he wasn't a servent. Please update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: tribbles On: April 19, 2008 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww i love this story >.
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Reviewed By: crazymind On: April 14, 2008 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is kinda short....I'm expecting or action or/and humor in the next one. Go on!!
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Reviewed By: Kahlua On: April 14, 2008 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one further great chapter to this splendid fanfic. I loved how you delved into Rin's budding Master-servant relationship with Archer. Please update your fanfic and still mind your proper grammar
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Reviewed By: crazymind On: April 02, 2008 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think it sucks. It's actualy so- Rin ('cause she's smart)
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Reviewed By: crazmind On: April 02, 2008 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's interesting and funny. Love it! More, more more!!
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