Title: Great Story Reviewed By: dark daydream [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 21:13 CDT Comment/Review: Hi! So I read this and noticed that noone had reviewed, which I thought was awful, and decided to let you know what I thought. The story is wonderful and I've always been a fan of Lex, you might want to make sure you edit it well(some words weren't spaced), but the story is great and I really think you have talent. I'm gonna go read the sequel to this now, lol. Good Luck, Chels.
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