| "Lessons of the Father" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile so I just re-read the first 7 chapters. I think I laughed even harder this time around while reading chap 2 than I did the first time. The part about Rin's first experience with childbirth and the shock of discovering where babies really come from. I could just imagine the expression on her face. The image in my mind of Sesshoumaru's first experience in holding a baby was hilarious. By the way, there was no mention of her regaining all her miko powers except for the small amount used on that arrow. Is that going to be the extent of her powers? I don't expect her to be superwoman but is she going to eventually gain more? Also, should she not think about Sesshoumaru giving her some self defense training? If she wants to be able to protect her son's life, she needs to train herself in every way that she can. She's stupid if she doesn't so she does not have to rely strictly on a bow and arrow. My last question: WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. The plot is unique which I like. You can take a well used plot and only go so many ways with it. I hope it doesn't go too far into the story before they find out Inuyasha's dead and how he died. This has to be so in order for it to be a Sess/Kag story. Also, she needs to know so she can grieve and eventually move on so her feelings for Sesshoumaru can develope. I thought it so adorable when Touga walked for him and started saying dada. Kagome should have stayed quiet and not have taken away the special meaning of him saying dada to Sesshoumaru. I could have smacked her in the mouth.
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I hope you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awesome chapter! keep up the great work. oh, and just so you know, i don't think Sesshoumaru is OOC at all. I keep up with the manga as well. Im glad you arent letting the negatives affect your writing...i cannot wait for more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 14:30 CST
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I am letting you know that I have added your story to my list of favorites and that I am expecting you to write another chapter very soon. I love how things are turning out, and your writing is commendable.
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Title: Total woman moment!!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey umm never read this fic before or I would have reviewed but, um yeah anyway totally loved the woman bit at the end of chapter one!!! "All the while listening to the woman grumble about men and their deranged views on how children are brought into the world." It totally reminded me of how ingnorant guys can be about women!!!! Anywho love it yadda yadda yadda I'm sure you can make or imagine the est of the blurb! loved *Draca*
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for the next chapter! I especially loved the part where Sesshoumaru was trying to get the baby to stop crying, "you will obey this Sesshoumaru" made me laugh my ass off. Your style of writing is great & im definetly hooked on this story...good luck!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow. This is great. Are you going to write more? I especially liked the part when Rin was like, "Definitely gonna talk to Jaken about the 'stork youkai'." lol I really like this and hope that you continue.
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Title: pixime
Reviewed By: Crazeebug [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That the end? Would love to see more chapters.
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Sesshoumaru knows nothing about the workings of Mother Nature, does he? Such ignorance will leave you with mental scarring. Just look at poor Rin! This fic is very good and I was interested in it after the first few sentences. Wonder what InuYasha's doing...? Hope you update soon. Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 04:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i hope Inuyasha will come back!!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
boy can I relate to poor kags I'm almost 7 months along with my third , and at this point have been ordered to mandatory relaxation and have been bored out of mind with out any suitable reading material I truly hope you continue with this story I like hows its going and the woman was right at the end about men and how they think it works with birth
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 22:12 CST
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i am assuming you have experienced labor? . . . one could feel her pain as they laughed at the sarcastic inner dialog. i am in eager anticipation of more. . . i hope yasha is alright and will come to her soon. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 22:12 CST
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OOohh. You have me intrigued. Please update soon.
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