| "Vegeta’s adventures at Night" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
What the Hell did you do to Vegita! |
Reviewed By: GOKUssj3432 On: July 03, 2002 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it but 50 people? that is a lot |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 08:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahaha lol this was another funny chapter
keep up the good work and hope to see the next
chapter soon
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 08:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe aww poor gohan!! lol lol hahahaha
good chapter hehehe but poor gohan!! lol |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 08:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
funny chapter! lol i think that show
fits vegeta perfectly.. lol lol hehee well
i'm off to chapter 3!! ^__^ great chapter |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
i review every chapter i read... lol but i know i'm reaviewin chapter 2 twice, but i just wanted to say good fic and i'll be back later 2mollo to finish up the rst *yawns* its nighty time for me
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe that was a funny chapter! great job! i esp. love the part where bulma reminded him to take out the trash on thurs. lol lol it was funny! sweet chapter by the way and dont take my other review as a flame ok? i was just expressin my feelings!
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay,
I like the part where Buzzums turns out to be an ice-jin. I enjoy the B/V "love" scenes. And I love the part where Vegeta is new to pregnancy. But the idea of Vegeta actually liking Buzzums scares me. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
just letting you know, I'm uh.. still not reading this, but it's nice to see your still working on it.. I think I'll help you a bit, I'll read it for grammer errors for ya.. you know, since no one is reading it..specially not me.. but I'll put myself through it, just to help you out ;)
hehe I can't help it.. this is just one FUNNY fic, it's great! Heavy comedy with a squeeze of lemon and a couple of shakes of Hentai for good measure! LMAO |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that is smoething i had in my dreams lol but this is a good ficcy keep it up and comming |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be sorry. This is a great lemon story>:-) I hope you'll ge more weird dreams. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked the story, it was kinda cute, and sick at the same time. But i did like the idea of Bulma being in charge in bed with Veggie-boy. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming I'm reading it lol |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
nope.. no one is reading this.. but ya know, you may as well continue it.. I mean since you started it right.. even if no one is reading it *heheh* |
Reviewed By: GOKU ssj stage 43 On: June 30, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aahahahahahahahahaha, getting his nuts re-sewed!?? ahahahahahha, i like this one! |
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