| "Vegeta’s adventures at Night" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
i review every chapter i read... lol but i know i'm reaviewin chapter 2 twice, but i just wanted to say good fic and i'll be back later 2mollo to finish up the rst *yawns* its nighty time for me
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe that was a funny chapter! great job! i esp. love the part where bulma reminded him to take out the trash on thurs. lol lol it was funny! sweet chapter by the way and dont take my other review as a flame ok? i was just expressin my feelings!
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay,
I like the part where Buzzums turns out to be an ice-jin. I enjoy the B/V "love" scenes. And I love the part where Vegeta is new to pregnancy. But the idea of Vegeta actually liking Buzzums scares me. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
just letting you know, I'm uh.. still not reading this, but it's nice to see your still working on it.. I think I'll help you a bit, I'll read it for grammer errors for ya.. you know, since no one is reading it..specially not me.. but I'll put myself through it, just to help you out ;)
hehe I can't help it.. this is just one FUNNY fic, it's great! Heavy comedy with a squeeze of lemon and a couple of shakes of Hentai for good measure! LMAO |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that is smoething i had in my dreams lol but this is a good ficcy keep it up and comming |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be sorry. This is a great lemon story>:-) I hope you'll ge more weird dreams. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked the story, it was kinda cute, and sick at the same time. But i did like the idea of Bulma being in charge in bed with Veggie-boy. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming I'm reading it lol |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
nope.. no one is reading this.. but ya know, you may as well continue it.. I mean since you started it right.. even if no one is reading it *heheh* |
Reviewed By: GOKU ssj stage 43 On: June 30, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aahahahahahahahahaha, getting his nuts re-sewed!?? ahahahahahha, i like this one! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 29, 2002 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooooo FUNNY!!!!!!
and incredably cute, too. i loved it!!!
for once, bulma had the upper hand. it was absolutely adorible how badly you could tell vegeta was a virgin! |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe that was Kawaii! Vegeta is so cute when he is not sure of what is going on! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was sweet like it a lot keepem coming |
Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I pretyt much enjoyed the fanfic, it was funny and cute all at once! You need to start a new line though when a new character starts speaking...other wise it gets confusing! But all in all a great fic! |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well i'm here to review chapter 1.. hehe.. well good chapter.. i must say.. but that cat meat to get a "chinese resturant feel" was pretty much insulting and very offending... it's just a sterotype... I'm chinese, and i dunt eat Cats.. or dogs.. or rats.. etc. and well... i know people who owns restuants and they dont serve cats too... other then that good chapter... don't take this as a flame please, i just wanted to explain my self and point that part out.. it might offend other ppl.. and well..i dunno.. ^__^
ja'ne
renchan |
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