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| "Dragonball One-Half" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: SSTR87 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 20:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to say thank you for reviewing my chapters. technically the story I complete, but I haven't posted all the chapters up yet. I will send you an email if you want any more info from me
| Reviewed By: Kumori Shadow Kage On: February 16, 2009 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, very nice indeed. Interesting thoughts on Ranma being th son of Tao. Even if it isn't true so to say. I do have a question for you though. Is this really done? If so, are you going to write a sequel? It has much promise. E-mail me with your response at dingo_con@hotmail.com. Also work on your grammar a little bit, you mispelled a few words that threw me off for a little bit. Until next time, Beware what lurks in the shadows..... Kumori Shadow Kage
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