| "A San Francisco Treat" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: kimakaanna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this story over on InuGrrrl's yaoi site and I'm so glad to find chapter 7 over here! I really do love this story. It's so creative. I do hope you finish this....please! I'd love to see what happens :)
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Title: Where R U?
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, what's happened 2 U? Please comeback and finish this story, it's been 4ever since you've written anything. B reading U
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please hurry and post the last chapter! I'm dying to see how the Brothers would this out!!!! B reading U!
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Title: Great story!!!
Reviewed By: Sango_the_taijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, although I don't really read many Inuyasha fics anymore. There are some spelling errors, but nothing to worry about. Otherwise, it's great! Good job! 100000000/10 P.S. Can you please check out my new story and review? It's called "Aleia's Fight" and it's in the Original section. I could really use some input on it since I don't generally post anything that isn't a fanfic and I have very little experience with originals. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: ahsayuni200 On: November 26, 2007 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So as I was reading I just couldn't stop. Your story just flows together so perfectly. It just kept me wanting more. This is the best Inu/Sess fanfic ever. It actually has real situations and problems. You are doing a great job so far i hope you finish. I'll be waiting for the rest!!!!
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the overall rating i actually give it a 9.5 but since they dont have that rating...anyway the story is really good and very well put together I'm enjoying it very much kinda wish we had heard Sesshoumaru's side of the story though...
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 15:24 CST
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Aww! I love how they first met. I also love how you include the scenes in the therapist's office. If there's one thing Californians are all about, it's therapy, lol. And when Naraku says that freaks aren't accepted in this society...well, someone who doesn't accept gay people shouldn't live in San Francisco, for sure. Oh! And I am, in fact, writing InuYasha fanfiction again. In fact, I'm working on 'My Little Pony'. Reading it over, I realized it was going in a direction I didn't want it to, and that's why I got stuck. That's part of the pressure of publishing serial stories, is that a writer can't go back and be like, "You know, I just didn't like this part. It doesn't fit the story. *delete delete delete*" So I've been writing and changing at will, and if I ever get the whole thing written, I'll publish it chapter by chapter again. But it definitely has to be done first. And thank you, for the compliment and for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 19:44 CST
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Oooh, I'm fascinated! Normally the Inu/Sess thing would make me go eek! but you portray the characters' conflict in a very believable way. Plus I live in San Francisco and I've never come across a fanfic set here before, so I just had to read and find out! I'll definitely keep reading!
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