| "Seduced By The Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibi Beji (not logged in) On: July 02, 2002 09:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good heavens! Why the hell am I even reading this?? I'm like, the world's biggest b/v fan, please tell me that this is b/v in the end!
But anyways, my comments...I think that Bulma is a bit ooc, I mean come on, these are still the androids that killed all her friends...or is she blinded by how Vegeta hurt her by ignoring her? It seems almost like she's trying to hurt him back for not caring about her...Who knows! I do intend to keep on reading though, so keep writing!! And I'll keep reviewing! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 02, 2002 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story!!!! But I want this 2 be a B/V Story. Is that what it's gonna be? Hope so. And Bulma is not a dirty slut. In the Z series Bulma only had one guy. So, bitch off. DJ hellfire. And how u know? Have you fucked her? And I supppose you are better for Vegeta? ~Snickers~ Hell No. I'm sure Vegeta likes his women dirty anyways. U can't handle him anyways. I'm sure. From that lil dirty comment you made. So, don't write one like that, if you don't want one back. |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good!! hehe I'm a Vegeta and Bulma lover but hey! i LIKE THIS ONE PLZZZZ KEEP WRITTING!! AND EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: dbz2 On: June 29, 2002 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate this story.......don't diss Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey that was pretty goodo!! i always new bulma was a dirty slut!!! she doesn't deserve i guy like vegeta!!!!
hehehe, thanx for the entertainment :) |
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