| "Seduced By The Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I know it says in the review below that I hated the fic, but after reading the other reviews, I decided to finish it. I'm kind of glad I did. I still didn't like 17/Bulma, but I LOVED the ending. I'm going to read the sequel right away.
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 16:23 CDT
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Title: umm....no
Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this fic at all really. I'm a firm believer in Bulma/Vegeta and I HATE 17. I think you're a great writer, I've read other stories of yours, but I just didn't like this one. I stopped at chap 9, so i don't know if Bulma and Vegeta get back together, but I just couldn't stand having 17 and Bulma bash Vegeta around Trunks. It kind of made me sick. I'll read your other Bulma/Vegeta fics, because 17/Bulma does nothing for me.
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Reviewed By: Buffgirl101 On: July 26, 2002 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI this was truly a great story I a mean wow... But youspelld somethings wrong so ponits down for that. But I think it the best thing I have read. The only parti didnt like was the ending.It dissapointed me but hey it was a vfunny ending. :) |
Reviewed By: ice On: July 23, 2002 08:36 CDT
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the story was hot and the surprise ending was good. i can't wait to read the other part. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 18, 2002 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crazy stuff! what a great story! you're soooo talented! (i'm not being sarcastic either, a rare thing for me!) yay!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it!! But plzzzzzz do not write a V/CC oh my god!! no plz!! keep up the great work |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
It hurts to read this fic...and yet, I still do!
I'm really interested in seeing if you can manage to squeeze a happy (v/b) ending out of this! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 10, 2002 09:15 CDT
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Hi,wussup? Anyways I kno the HELL U DIDN'T!!!! U aren't gonna hook up V/CC are you? If U do,I'm gonna damn yo ass straight 2 HELL!!!!!URH!!!This had betta be a B/V Not a fuckin CC/V cuz that shit WON'T GO!!!!!Ohwe!!!! I could just blast sum damn body!!!!!!Ok,great chappie,ne-ways!!!Can't wait 4 da next!!Gurl,I'm pratically glaring at the screen! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 18:50 CDT
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You have no idea how painful it is to read this...but then again, you probably do...Oh kami, please let this have a happy ending! It ahrdly seems possible but...you're the author! YOu can MAKE it happen!!
Awesome work, yo! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 07, 2002 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup? Anyways I LUVVVVVVEEEEDDDDDDD da chapter!lol. Can't wait 4 da next gurl!!! |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hun e-mail me when you update plzzzz I really like your fic!! HE he I love Vegeta but well....keep writing! |
Reviewed By: ice On: July 04, 2002 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it. would u plz write more, i would like to know if bulma gets trunks |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 03, 2002 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved this chappie!! But I'm the BIGGEST B/V Fan, So PLEZ,PLEZ Make this a B/V!!!!!! ok. I'm gonna keep readin anyways. Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ice On: July 02, 2002 10:50 CDT
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i loved ur story can u plz write the ending part i would love to know what happens. |
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