| "Seduced By The Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 18, 2002 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crazy stuff! what a great story! you're soooo talented! (i'm not being sarcastic either, a rare thing for me!) yay!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it!! But plzzzzzz do not write a V/CC oh my god!! no plz!! keep up the great work |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
It hurts to read this fic...and yet, I still do!
I'm really interested in seeing if you can manage to squeeze a happy (v/b) ending out of this! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 10, 2002 09:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi,wussup? Anyways I kno the HELL U DIDN'T!!!! U aren't gonna hook up V/CC are you? If U do,I'm gonna damn yo ass straight 2 HELL!!!!!URH!!!This had betta be a B/V Not a fuckin CC/V cuz that shit WON'T GO!!!!!Ohwe!!!! I could just blast sum damn body!!!!!!Ok,great chappie,ne-ways!!!Can't wait 4 da next!!Gurl,I'm pratically glaring at the screen! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have no idea how painful it is to read this...but then again, you probably do...Oh kami, please let this have a happy ending! It ahrdly seems possible but...you're the author! YOu can MAKE it happen!!
Awesome work, yo! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 07, 2002 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup? Anyways I LUVVVVVVEEEEDDDDDDD da chapter!lol. Can't wait 4 da next gurl!!! |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hun e-mail me when you update plzzzz I really like your fic!! HE he I love Vegeta but well....keep writing! |
Reviewed By: ice On: July 04, 2002 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it. would u plz write more, i would like to know if bulma gets trunks |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 03, 2002 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved this chappie!! But I'm the BIGGEST B/V Fan, So PLEZ,PLEZ Make this a B/V!!!!!! ok. I'm gonna keep readin anyways. Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ice On: July 02, 2002 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved ur story can u plz write the ending part i would love to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji (not logged in) On: July 02, 2002 09:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good heavens! Why the hell am I even reading this?? I'm like, the world's biggest b/v fan, please tell me that this is b/v in the end!
But anyways, my comments...I think that Bulma is a bit ooc, I mean come on, these are still the androids that killed all her friends...or is she blinded by how Vegeta hurt her by ignoring her? It seems almost like she's trying to hurt him back for not caring about her...Who knows! I do intend to keep on reading though, so keep writing!! And I'll keep reviewing! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 02, 2002 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story!!!! But I want this 2 be a B/V Story. Is that what it's gonna be? Hope so. And Bulma is not a dirty slut. In the Z series Bulma only had one guy. So, bitch off. DJ hellfire. And how u know? Have you fucked her? And I supppose you are better for Vegeta? ~Snickers~ Hell No. I'm sure Vegeta likes his women dirty anyways. U can't handle him anyways. I'm sure. From that lil dirty comment you made. So, don't write one like that, if you don't want one back. |
Reviewed By: Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good!! hehe I'm a Vegeta and Bulma lover but hey! i LIKE THIS ONE PLZZZZ KEEP WRITTING!! AND EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: dbz2 On: June 29, 2002 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate this story.......don't diss Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey that was pretty goodo!! i always new bulma was a dirty slut!!! she doesn't deserve i guy like vegeta!!!!
hehehe, thanx for the entertainment :) |
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