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| "Playing House (Yes the title sucks...shut up Dx)" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Tenshi~
Reviewed By: MAIDEN OF TIME AND SPACE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Heeeu, sup ya'll?? I love using Kat's account ^_^ Anyways, I remember this story. *saw it before* You're both much better writers then before, so yeah. Keep up the randomness and the not making sense-ness~
| Reviewed By: quamp On: November 14, 2007 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but you're just not funny. However, I believe that with time and practice, you could become better writers. I suggest you try reading some more books on how to write. The nickname "Yugers" makes me think that Yu-Gi-Oh! has boogers coming out of his nose. This is not an image I want. Hiei is a bit OOC in thinking Kat is his girlfriend. Keep trying, though.
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