| "New Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryan76 On: February 20, 2009 18:39 CST
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Curious what going to happen next and if you will finish it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... just wondering if this is an inuyasha/kagome pairing until the end... until next time...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 14:04 CST
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How to put this..... This is well written, and has potential, but the whole Sango/IY thing was just way too fast. And Rin right behind that? One minute IY is falling apart for K, and the next he's screwing S and R's brains out? Makes me question just how much he really loves her, to jump into sex mere hours (minutes?) after K leaves. I know he's angry and hurting, it just seems too much out of character. Given time, a few weeks, I could see him w/someone else, trying to work through the pain and move on, but right after? Just too fast. If he can go from K to someone else in minutes, even out of anger, it makes me wonder just what kind of commitment he's capable of. Def not someone I'd choose to be with, without a doubt. But again, you have good writing style, and the story has potential, backed off of all the gratuitous sex. Just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: December 02, 2007 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far and your right Inyuasa is a good guy who deserves a ittle fun now and again. He always gets the bad end of the stick but here it might work out. Rin and Sango both seem to like being with him andhe should have a little fun now. So great and am looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 16:37 CST
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Odd, I could have sworn I had reviewed this story before...oh well. Wonderful chapter, your story is hitting it off really well. For some odd reason I want Miroku to find the trio in that position and just feel so bad that him and Kagome go off together...not to BE together, but to find themselves again and see what they can do to get their loves back. But of course it is your story, so do what you must..lol...I like it anyways. =)
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very interenting!! I like it
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 03:50 CST
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Interesting. You've got my attention, most definately. The question arises, just what did K do? Was it sexual cheating, or something entirely different? Somehow, the latter seems more likely, and more interesting. Can't wait to find out just what you've gotten them into!
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Reviewed By: InuChica On: November 11, 2007 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the story, but what will the pairings be? Will Inu forgive Kag?
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Reviewed By: BabyBlueSkies On: November 10, 2007 22:20 CST
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Just read the second chpt. That was fast. When will the next one be up? I was thinking that it was Sesshy she cheated with, but I need more detail as to what happened. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Anon1234 On: November 10, 2007 21:44 CST
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this is good, write more
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: BabyBlueSkies On: November 10, 2007 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually review, but I am excited to read a pro-Yasha fanfic. So many fics now bash him as a character so I can't wait to see what you will do with Kagome's betrayal.
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