"Gingerbread Man" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 22:06 CDT Comment/Review: I agree. It was actually pretty funny. Immediately after Breda started running away from Ed I thought, 'Dude, you can transmute someone into a cookie. That goes against Equivalent Exchange!' but I let it slide for the sake of the fanfic. Then Mustang walked in and said exactly what I had been thinking. *whew* Great job! It was cute and I really liked it. I can just see Ed having a dream like that. lol darn Christmas... (= ]
| Reviewed By: dragon chick On: November 13, 2007 06:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was awesome. It had to be one of the funniest works I've read here. It really made my day. It was creative and new, your spelling was flawless(at I didn't notice if you made a mistake)and the characters were IN character. Very well done!
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