"Damned if you Don't" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: HiroshimaNagasaki On: June 19, 2008 03:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: You've got some idea, man. Just develop it and allow us readers to enjoy it. That's not easy, but that's what attracts attention. Pure sweet Kasumi in xxx-rate scenes, mwahahaha.
| Title: Double double... Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 16:34 CST Comment/Review: I hope your realize that you placed the chapter in here twice (that is to say that it ends halfway through the file and then repeats itself). This could be really funny (I know that's not how you intend it, but the comic factor is huge in the first chapter). From the offices of AMWOOD co
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