"The Beast Within" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Dude, hot. Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 23:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was.....wow. They......wow. Damn Kyuubi's a horny bastard. I mean......wow. Rick that was awesome. For a story completely built on sex I really enjoyed this, and read the other reviews, don't worry about the way you write. You're not getting paid for this. Just do what you do and don't worry about everyone else's negative comments. That's my motto. I'll be looking out for what happens next Rick and shine eternal.
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Reviewed By: XXBreakawayXX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 00:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SEXY COULD TURN ANYONE ON KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Reviewed By: XXBreakawayXX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 00:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: AWSUM MADE ME VARY HORNY LOLZ U WERE GOOD
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 00:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Man you deffinatly know how to go all out that was fucking awsome hope to see more from you
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