| "To catch a falling star" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 02:32 CDT
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Another good chapter, however watch out for typos and grammatical errors, there were a good number of them this time
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet chapter. Simply delightful to read, although I must say I am burning with curiosity as to what Zexion is hiding, and why he acts the way he does. Thank you for updating, and I am anxious to read the next chapter, as each one is wonderful. Great use of adjectives by the way, also there was a typo in one of Zexion's dialogues you are missing the t in "to", I believe the line is " holding me and trying to get me to talk to you". Just thought you should know, keep up the good work and good luck with everything.
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chuckles*I love Axel, he is so amusing, the way he stepped in was simply marvelous. At least Zexion know's that Sora is Demyx's cousin now, and how Demyx feels. Though I am curious as to why he is so upset now, but as Axel said hopefully Demyx can fix it. I am anxious to read the next chapter, the meeting between the two now, promises to be interesting and a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work and please update another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Zexy...getting the wrong idea as always. I really hope he and Demyx are able to work things out soon, they are so sweet together. I am curious as to how Kira died, though I am sure it adds a great deal to how Zexion is now. Thank you for writing another chapter, and I look forward to reading the next one. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: anime_love_kohaku On: April 12, 2009 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that chapter was soo sweet, I feel so sad for Demy I just want to give him a huge hug. Zex it cute too, but bah he is so frustrating sometimes you just want to accidentally shove him into Dem's arms xD. Great chapter, I am dieing to see how they finally end up together Dx i want it to happens so badly they are such an endearing couple. Please update soon, and keep up the good work ^-^
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Dem is so cute i just want to hug him like crazy, same with Zex. I love the way you change point of views, it is a really tricky thing to do but you do it wonderfully. I find Roxas' personality changing from chapter to chapter but it keeps things interesting, and the fact that i love Axel and Roxas as a couple just makes it even better. Continue the great work, and please update soon, I would love to read more
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: Fasha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please post a new chapter soon. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next!!!
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Title: UpDate!!
Reviewed By: Fashanologgedon-chan On: April 10, 2008 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your idea. I am looking forward to reading more and giving more reviews. Soooooo update soon please!!! :)
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you have it in first-person. It gives a better insight to what the characters are feeling, and relate to them better. I really want to see Demyx catch his star.
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