Reviewed By:Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 04:06 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: It seems to read a little rough to me for some reason that I just can't quite put my finger on other than a few errors here and there. Roxas is rather cool about leaving behind the only person he seemed to have befriended in the Organization so I can't imagine him shedding any tears over it and Axel shedding tears... all I can think about is his make-up smearing/running. I like how you bring up the fact that Axel would have to kill him. Knowing he'll have to murder his best and only friend is what definitely brings the angst into play here.
