| "Pack Instinct" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Overall it was a good one shot. But it should have been a little longer. I did notice a few gramatical errors, but not too bad. With practice I'm sure you could get better. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Black demon On: May 14, 2008 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was too short, should have been longer, but the writing style is good....
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked this story. It was sweet!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
short but sweet... really liked it... great work...
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