| "A Latent Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 07:04 CDT
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this is a very interesting story! somehow i think that with the way you have the past/future tangled up that kagome will actually end up with her own future, but hopefully it will be a better one where human and youkai live together peacefully and it wont be so polluted. i cant wait to find out if kagome ends up jumping down the well again to reset the past and try again.
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Reviewed By: snowbird-youkai On: March 30, 2008 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you have to be so mean and end it at such a heartstopping cliffie? I've been waiting almost 2 months for the update! Please, update! I wonder if his grandmother's spell as a child is over, meaning his lesson has been learned. Unless it was pushed under layers of ice because of the confusion it would create in the mind of an adult Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: Soleil Chev [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 16:24 CDT
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Great story. So write more and update this! Killing Sesshomaru is not cool!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 19:10 CST
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ur darn right you better be running away!!!! *chases around* oh u better update quickly before i find you and MAKE you update!! FL
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 21:36 CST
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*squeal!* Oh now you've done it. You've drawn me in. I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat pounding the desktop and saying, "no no no! This can't be it!" (big grin) I LOVE suspense. Your vision of Sesshoumaru as a short person is very believable. I await the next installment as patiently as I can. :)But I have to warn you... I'm hooked. :D
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:46 CST
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(sends heated glare at author)........why oh why would you leave it there?...the suspense is gonna kill me.......please PLEASE dont take to long with the next chapter......this is just sooo good
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-faints- sessh- wat is with females? tba- u died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .. i think... ~sessh- wat?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-shakes head- u didnt read the story did u.? ~sessh- pouts- i dont like to read. ~tba- that explains soooooooo much u know. ~sessh- gives her a glare- ~tba- that never works. remember im The Black Angel ~sessh- wat ever. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story with well thought out plot (even with the 'cruel' cliffhanger!!!). Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! Evil cliffie! O_O I'm fairly sure you're not killing him off, so I assume that either Tenseiga transported him somewhere safe, or he got transported back to where he was turned small and has grown up again. Either way, I'm on needles waiting for you to update again. Out of the four fics I'm reading at the moment, I look forward to these updates the most. I really hope your Inuyasha muse gets its act together and supply you with inspiration again soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 01:03 CST
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Start running woman. that was the mother of all cliffies you just dumped on us. I hope you're at your keyboard writing. LOL. Keep it up. DD
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 10:59 CST
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Oh, wow. I'm not so confused anymore... I like this a lot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hopefully it wasnt naraku.. hm..... ~Sessh- i dont like the way u think wench. (meaning tba) ~lil sessh- wat am i doing here? ~ tba- grabbs lil sessh into her arms- ur sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!! -kisses his forhead- ~ lil sessh- blushes- ~ sessh- that is a sign of weakness. that is why 'this' sesshomaru is stronger than u. ~ lil sessh- i have something u dont though. ~ sessh- looks at him- and wat is that? ~ lil sessh- tba. ~ tba- hugs him- sesshomaru i think u should act a little bit more like him. ~ sessh- he is me!!!!!!!!! ~tba- yeah. but a smarter and cute you. ~ kagome- how ironic. ur paents always did say that the younger u are the smarter u are. and that the older u get the dumber u get. ~ sessh- this sesshomaru is smarter than a little child. ~ tba- u know u called ur self a child right? ~ sessh- uh.. this sesshomaru is very well aware. ~ tba-... anywayz. i think lil sesshy's sounds so cute in the story.i wonder if kagome could actully spend some time with him and then he could learn to trust her. then when he turns back he might tell her y he trys to 'kill' inuyasha. and y he insists calling inuyasha his little brother if he hates him so much. and y he hates humans. -hugs lil sessh- im keeping him. ~ sessh- ....... as long as u have a new hobby. ~ kags- wat is her hobby any way? ~ sessh- shiver- looking up ways to annoy me. she got up to 97. ~kags- did she try them yet? ~ tba- o yea. last week i stole his clothes when he was bathing and replaced them with- ~ sessh- uh... -anime sweat drops- bye! and uh... update soon! bye! ~ tba- wait! im not finished! ~ sessh- uh yeah u are! -turns camera off- ~fin... ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: iluvinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!!!! Its such a great story!! Its my favorite one that I've read so far and I've read quite a few. Please hurry up and write the next chapter :) Its a masterpiece
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, give me MOOOORE! I'm totally addicted to this story. You have to quit your day-time job and become a full-time fanfic writer! ;) Gimme more more more more MORE!!! Hurry up and update! :D
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 14:57 CST
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OMG This is getting to be so amazing, I can't wait for the next update! Wow, Kagome has really screwed up this time. Great job!
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