| "A Latent Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 11, 2008 21:04 CST
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Cliff hanger ending AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I love this story. It can get a bit confusing, but it is well written and is well thought out.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 18:00 CST
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eek!! kagome needs to find that subjugation necklace and soon!! *grabs a rolled up newspaper and smacks inuyasha over the head with it* bad dog! bad bad bad inuyasha!! FL
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 02:56 CST
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This story is amazing, wonderful, stupendous! I'm in awe of how you were able to play with the time-line in such a well thought out, linear fashion yet is still so fanciful. The recreation of events is intriguing to follow and I'm still wondering what caused what and how all these changes will manifest in the future. I'm a bit worried about chibi-sess just because it becomes inane in so many fics but from the writing talent I've seen displayed so far in this story I'm sure you've got something cool planned there. Anyhow, keep up the good work, I'm excited to see what you come up with next. Ciao
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha! sesshy turned into a little person! ha ha ha!; sessh- it is not respectful to make fun of this sesshomaru. that is, if u still wish to live. ; tba- put a sock in it! u wouldnt kill me; sessh-evil smirk- u have no idea of wat this sesshomaru is capable of; tba- go ahead and kill me. remember im 'theblackangels_' its supposed to be theblackangel. which means death. i pick tba 4 short. im just gonna come back anywayz.; sessh- u are truly annoying; tba- so are u jerk!; sessh-i would rather be stuck in a cave with the miko for a year then spead a day with u; tba- is that a challange?;sessh- maybe.;kag-do i have a say in this?;both-no.;kag- i choose the one that doesnt include sessh;tba- we just said u have no say in this.;sessh- im gone. ; kag-me too.;tba-watever. oops lost track of time! it rocks and i hope u update soon. -takes rope- im gonna need this to get sesshomaru..-disappears in the shadows-
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 01, 2008 18:40 CST
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Talk about different. I am at a loss of words...the story is great, well written, and there is a kiddie Sesshoumaru. I really am looking forward to seeing which direction the story is going to take. Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 12:28 CST
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ooh!! not fair, another cliffhanger. darn. ya kagome really did make BIG mess of things. lol. tisk tisk. can't wait for the next chapter. FL
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahhaa XD Priceless! How unexpected! Will Kagome go back to the future and try again, or will she try to find the cure to his curse? (at least he still has both arms this time) And where on earth did Inuyasha go? Oh please please PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: rhyvin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 14:46 CST
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chibiko sesshoumaru!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very clever plot that makes me want to scream. I can't believe Kagome has to relive all the events with the jewel. Or maybe she does not need to break it this time if she just makes sure that certain people are reunited, so to speak. Being a total Sesshoumaru/Kagome fan I hope that she does not fix the time line to become Inuyasha's mate. This is because the same problem would exist, except the pinning would be for Kikyou. Of course, Kagome would not incite her offspring to murder Kikyou, so that would be different also. However, I think that Inuyasha's affections are flawed when it comes to Kikyou and Kagome for the reason that he cannot distinguish between the two enough to select to spend his life with one and let go of the other. Inuyasha needs to find someone else to love IMHO. I always love your original character Akiyama (I assume).
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You brought Akiyama (that was his name, right?) into this story too! This is gonna be awesome! I really hope you have time to update it as frequently as with the other ones you've written. :)
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: December 25, 2007 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsomeness. don't think i have ever read a story like this. I need to know what happens next and how things turn out. please update soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 14:39 CST
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*fidgets in seat* supsense...ooh..hurry please!! FL
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh now it is extra interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. :3
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Reviewed By: sooo good On: December 20, 2007 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. can't wait for next chappie. A few spelling and grammar mistakes,as weel as flow, but other than that... Perfection! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You've got a really really interesting storyline started here! I knew you'd write another masterpiece, but I didn't think it'd be so soon. :D I have only one negative comment; if the 'future' is mostly 18'th century (or whatever it was you said), how can there be a photo album? Painted portraits I'd buy, but not photos. ;) Apart from that, I can't wait to read more! This is gonna be so exciting! *jumps up and down*
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