| "Kingdom Hearts:Scattered Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 11:42 CST
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maybe maybe not still thinking about that but you still have all of your kick ass Crystal powers along with the pervy Wolf lol
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Title: About Koji?
Reviewed By: Koji Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 07:49 CST
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Is Koji gonna get a keyblade in your story? Just thought I ask.
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Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 21:22 CST
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Shut up Koji!or I'll get Emi to shoot you!XP I have six other people using this computer so ha!
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Title: [snores]
Reviewed By: Koji Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 10:50 CST
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Took you long enough Sarah!
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Title: welcome
Reviewed By: darkfox566 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 02:02 CST
Comment/Review:
ha ha! nice, it's getting better every chapter-- and for now... my review was better! my review was better! ha-ha-haa-ha-haa!
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Title: you suck!!
Reviewed By: AxesHiroki On: December 05, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sarah, your story, is .............. is............................ okay. great job, and take your time when you're doing it and break between large paragrahps. proofread, then submit. i gave you a honest review so there.
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Title: wow...?
Reviewed By: shade-san On: November 21, 2007 01:10 CST
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that was interesting... i thought the introduction to the characters was kinda tedious, but that's cause i already know who they are... other then that, you've really improved! i'm glad you got rid of that person: talking like this all the time and changed it to "talking like this!" great work! can't wait for the next one.
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